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I agree.
Agreed, good choice of words and where they are in the poem. It could be longer i think but i enjoyed reading it.
that's great. thanks for the advice.
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It was a good verse. Coulda been slightly longer, agian, but I liked it.
I don't think it needs to be longer, poetry comes in all shapes and sizes, I think that you wrote a really good poem, good job!!!!!!!! :D
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I agree.
ReplyDeleteAgreed, good choice of words and where they are in the poem. It could be longer i think but i enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeletethat's great. thanks for the advice.
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It was a good verse. Coulda been slightly longer, agian, but I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI don't think it needs to be longer, poetry comes in all shapes and sizes, I think that you wrote a really good poem, good job!!!!!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteNice dialogue
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